Changes made in response to feedback

Original contents page (left)

Edited contents page (right)

Original double page spread (left)Edited double page spread (below)

Feedback from Teacher

This is the feedback I have received from my teacher on my magazine. I agree with most of his comments apart from that about the front cover. I personally think the front cover is better having more headlines so I am going to keep it how it is. Also as previously mentioned on my blog, when my work was lost it became difficult to make massive changes to the front cover and contents page. I am going to try to the best of my ability to improve the other changes.

Peer Assessment

This is the feedback I received from my peers on how 

to improve my magazine

These are the changes I made (where possible) as suggested